2010-02-15, 09:18 PM
Personal nitpicks: the pink and purple parts of the text feel like they need more contrast, especially the l, s, and t in "primordial state," which get lost in the background image. Also, because the "Yves Klein" is not colorized the way the rest of the quote is, it looks a bit out of place, or like it's being given too much emphasis.

