kwaz Wrote:NPCs
To their credit this is a huge amount of text (40 of 70-odd pages) to spell correctly. But, still, these can bug you. I'll go through the rest tomorrow.
First, there are two spaces after a period. Second, you fixed the spelling error but left both of the grammatical ones. I don't think this topic should focus on simple spelling and grammar errors, because there are far too many of them.
Ontopic : Yellow/white seraphim does not "stay" on your arm as you walk. Looks like you're dribbling the damned thing.

