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Opinions on this, I need some criticism. - Kawasari Mimoto - 2009-10-13
In that case, redoing character one final time
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Most likely staying with this one, since the hair doesn't match the outfit, itself. But it looks nicer this way, IMO. Why black hair? I looked at Laharl's picture down in my sig, his eyes matches his scarf, but his hair doesn't match the rest of his clothing, yet it still looks matching. So I figured I'd do the same, changed the eye color to a light-blue/sky-blue to match the Screamer. Changed hair to black, heh. Also have a electric guitar on her back, irl, I'm a huge Rock&Roll and Hard Rock kinda guy.
Opinions on this, I need some criticism. - finalbragade - 2009-10-13
What are you going for exactly?
I made a character to look "dark" but not "emo"... apparently i got a post apotolyptic look now(as commented by some maplers)...
I think once you establish what look you're going for.. then you should achieve a "PERFECT"outfit, because so far it seem like you're just picking random "cute" stuff...
Opinions on this, I need some criticism. - Kawasari Mimoto - 2009-10-13
finalbragade Wrote:What are you going for exactly?
I made a character to look "dark" but not "emo"... apparently i got a post apotolyptic look now(as commented by some maplers)...
I think once you establish what look you're going for.. then you should achieve a "PERFECT"outfit, because so far it seem like you're just picking random "cute" stuff...
Originally wanted an outfit that went with Kitsune accs. Didn't work well, they're right, too chunky. 2nd time, wanted her to look like a loner / rocker, this works for me, actually. I'll keep it the way it is.
Opinions on this, I need some criticism. - finalbragade - 2009-10-13
Khoi Wrote:Originally wanted an outfit that went with Kitsune accs. Didn't work well, they're right, too chunky. 2nd time, wanted her to look like a loner / rocker, this works for me, actually. I'll keep it the way it is.
The star in the hair doesn't really say... Loner... it makes your character look to outgoing or peepy...
Opinions on this, I need some criticism. - Dual - 2009-10-13
Not much of a loner, but it definitely says rocker.
Opinions on this, I need some criticism. - IllegallySane - 2009-10-13
First one is pretty cute looking. I would admit though the clothes needs to be different for it to work.
What if you combined the eyes, glasses, and clothes from #2 and combined it with #1? Otherwise, Stick with #2, since I do agree the eyes in #1 seem too soul-less.